01-09-2018, 11:27 PM
(01-09-2018, 03:44 AM)nibbed Wrote: Hi dukealien,Without flat-out explaining (that's in the Spoiler), it would mess with the open meaning (talking potential rather than realized here). But your six words are a more pleasing composition than my 17 syllables! Thanks.
why not:
Points and Folds
Origami proves
humanity constructs
perfectly enough.
might it destroy something hidden
or mess with that tiny meter?
-nibbed
Quote:hard to weigh, can´t build a hydrogen bomb from a sheet of paper.. but no silicone chip either
(i always take things too literal.. your haiku is a nice hommage to the art of folding paper)
Thanks! The intended meaning is a bit diffuse:
And thanks to all readers as well as the commenters.
Non-practicing atheist

