01-03-2018, 11:56 AM
It's that kind of subtlety of meaning that makes a poem worthwhile. I can't tell you how happy I was to see that you didn't use the horrendous hyperbole of "world" instead of "life", which so many would have been (and have been) tempted to do. This way, each time we read the poem we can debate it further
It could be worse
