01-02-2018, 04:28 AM
Ellajam: thanks so much for coming back to it. I appreciate the input. The title will certainly be altered in the next revision. 
vagabond: I agree with most of your points, and will certainly consider them in the next edit. Thank you also for giving it another read.
I'll probably let this one sit for a spell, so that I can come back to it fresh. Thanks to everybody for the generous gifts of crit.
vagabond: I agree with most of your points, and will certainly consider them in the next edit. Thank you also for giving it another read.
I'll probably let this one sit for a spell, so that I can come back to it fresh. Thanks to everybody for the generous gifts of crit.