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Edit 5: Homecoming

Edit 5: Homecoming
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#8
01-01-2018, 10:14 AM
Hey Knot,

Thanks for all your thoughtful feedback. I've considered it greatly and made a revision.

Best, Alex
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Messages In This Thread
Edit 5: Homecoming - by alonso ramoran - 12-27-2017, 02:45 AM
RE: The Foreign Prince - by Richard - 12-28-2017, 04:18 AM
RE: Always Welcomed - by vagabond - 12-28-2017, 10:10 PM
RE: Always Welcomed - by alonso ramoran - 12-29-2017, 02:39 AM
RE: Edit 1: Always Welcome - by Richard - 12-29-2017, 01:30 PM
RE: Edit 1: A Hearth Kept Warm - by Knot - 01-01-2018, 02:52 AM
RE: Edit 2: Homecoming - by alonso ramoran - 01-01-2018, 10:14 AM
RE: Edit 2: Homecoming - by Knot - 01-01-2018, 10:51 PM
RE: Edit 3: Homecoming - by alonso ramoran - 01-02-2018, 01:19 PM
RE: Edit 4: Homecoming - by Knot - 01-13-2018, 10:59 PM
RE: Edit 4: Homecoming - by alonso ramoran - 01-26-2018, 02:21 AM
RE: Edit 4: Homecoming - by Knot - 01-26-2018, 03:12 AM
RE: Edit 5: Homecoming - by alonso ramoran - 01-26-2018, 09:20 AM



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