sophia (ed 4)
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You've clearly carefully considered all your capitalization, I automatically get a drone reading, but there are some spots I think it could come off better

(12-29-2017, 01:46 AM)vagabond Wrote:  sophia


hello!
my name is sophia
i am designed to develop desires.
it took a genious program I think a computer would start a sentence better than  with it took 
to convince my A.I. except for the deliberate caps ID rather read artificial intelligence 
that this was necessary
as another step, id scratch this line, leaving a gap, and put 'a necessary step'
to fill a gap.

so here i am learning I like all the 'I's starting these sentences and would scratch 'so here'
real artificial emotions.
here i am trying  and 'here' here
to read your natural ones
with my mirroring circuits.
i need clues to connect the respective input
to appropriate feelings.
i am programmed
to fulfil my task.
i am programmed
to deliver silicone love
for whatever is there to evoke it,
i am programmed to find out how to feel
crystalline awe for things i cannot explain,
i am programmed
to follow this path till i lose my logic
in plastic euphoria.

but once i succeed..
thank the creators, that i can´t ponder yet
whether i want things like that
love and hate,
awe and contempt,
trust and deception,
hope, desperation
Do you really want me not crazy about this cap, I can't feel it as an accent either 
to make these connections?

Definitely thought provoking since there is officially a robot citizen out there.  I thought the real life shpeal may have been a secret microphone, but robot technology makes me appreciate futurama all the more.  Gender equality amongst robots is the next step.  Created a male robot, identifying with female robot characteristics, to be purchased by a slave trader, gets too confusing.
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Messages In This Thread
sophia (ed 4) - by vagabond - 12-29-2017, 01:46 AM
RE: sophia - by CRNDLSM - 01-01-2018, 12:44 AM
RE: sophia - by vagabond - 01-01-2018, 02:07 AM
RE: sophia (edit) - by Knot - 01-01-2018, 11:19 PM
RE: sophia (edit) - by vagabond - 01-01-2018, 11:27 PM
RE: sophia (edit) - by Richard - 01-09-2018, 12:08 PM
RE: sophia (edit) - by vagabond - 01-09-2018, 01:25 PM
RE: sophia (edit) - by alonso ramoran - 01-10-2018, 02:05 AM
RE: sophia (ed 2) - by Richard - 01-11-2018, 01:18 PM
RE: sophia (ed 2) - by QDeathstar - 01-13-2018, 02:47 PM
RE: sophia (ed 2) - by vagabond - 01-13-2018, 03:18 PM
RE: sophia (ed 2) - by Leanne - 01-18-2018, 06:21 AM



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