Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1

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Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1

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12-29-2017, 07:02 PM

(12-29-2017, 01:17 PM)Richard Wrote: The dream began as they often do: -I know a few others said to drop the dream aspect of the poem. I wonder what would happen if you ended on it? Just a thought.

Interesting suggestion! I'll play around with that, thank you! All of your comments were very helpful.

I appreciate you giving me your read on it and taking the time out from your holidays to do so. Thumbsup

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Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Lizzie - 12-09-2017, 04:14 AM

RE: The Golden Bullet - by ellajam - 12-09-2017, 05:15 AM

RE: The Golden Bullet - by nibbed - 12-09-2017, 04:05 PM

RE: The Golden Bullet - by Knot - 12-09-2017, 10:47 PM

RE: The Golden Bullet - by vagabond - 12-10-2017, 02:52 AM

RE: The Golden Bullet - by KYPunk - 12-10-2017, 08:39 AM

RE: The Golden Bullet - by Lizzie - 12-11-2017, 01:15 PM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Lizzie - 12-11-2017, 10:54 PM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Tiger the Lion - 12-11-2017, 11:19 PM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Lizzie - 12-15-2017, 02:14 AM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Knot - 12-12-2017, 12:00 AM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by nibbed - 12-12-2017, 09:39 AM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Lizzie - 12-12-2017, 09:50 AM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by nibbed - 12-12-2017, 01:27 PM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by milo - 12-12-2017, 09:50 AM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Todd - 12-23-2017, 02:43 PM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Lizzie - 12-25-2017, 05:07 AM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Richard - 12-29-2017, 01:17 PM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Lizzie - 12-29-2017, 07:02 PM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by ellajam - 12-29-2017, 08:04 PM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by vagabond - 12-31-2017, 04:02 AM

RE: Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1 - by Lizzie - 01-02-2018, 04:28 AM

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