12-29-2017, 03:33 AM
(12-27-2017, 09:04 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Listen, Clever Clogssomehow the line "hail mary by any name" has a really strong impact.
This is what happens
when genius forgets itself;
when unrepentant clever
forsakes and is forsaken.
It's cold outside.
The only hope
is in implosion-
a Hail Mary
by any name.
(besides the prayer i googled some last ditch effort sports move)
i am not even sure how to connect it to implosion, only implosion seems like a solitary solution.
the beginning of the poem seems to paraphrase "those who criticize are more likely to be criticized" .. i think nobody should hold back out of fear to be criticized, although this probably has some inherent flaws, like personal error doing harm.
i wonder if this is at least in the vicinity of what you wrote about; anyway, thank you for the read.
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