Listen, Clever Clogs
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(12-27-2017, 09:04 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Listen, Clever Clogs
 
This is what happens
when genius forgets itself;
 
when unrepentant clever
forsakes and is forsaken.
 
It's cold outside.
 
The only hope
is in implosion-
 
a Hail Mary
by any name.
somehow the line "hail mary by any name" has a really strong impact.
(besides the prayer i googled some last ditch effort sports move)
i am not even sure how to connect it to implosion, only implosion seems like a solitary solution.

the beginning of the poem seems to paraphrase "those who criticize are more likely to be criticized" .. i think nobody should hold back out of fear to be criticized, although this probably has some inherent flaws, like personal error doing harm.
i wonder if this is at least in the vicinity of what you wrote about; anyway, thank you for the read.
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Listen, Clever Clogs - by Tiger the Lion - 12-27-2017, 09:04 AM
RE: Listen, Clever Clogs - by vagabond - 12-29-2017, 03:33 AM
RE: Listen, Clever Clogs - by ellajam - 12-29-2017, 06:03 AM
RE: Listen, Clever Clogs - by nibbed - 02-14-2018, 05:31 AM
RE: Listen, Clever Clogs - by Tiger the Lion - 09-01-2024, 12:35 AM
RE: Listen, Clever Clogs - by busker - 09-01-2024, 01:07 AM
RE: Listen, Clever Clogs - by Tiger the Lion - 09-01-2024, 02:08 AM
RE: Listen, Clever Clogs - by Mark A Becker - 09-01-2024, 08:25 AM
RE: Listen, Clever Clogs - by Bunx - 09-02-2024, 03:42 AM



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