Eve

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what a strange conclusion: "i have failed to convey my meaning well enough. i will remove the poem."
this site would be pretty empty and otherwise filled with blunt statements if everyone followed this line of thought.
try to make it clearer.

If I explain each line will it help? I want it to be more accessible while at the same time retaining all its subtleties. I fear I've read it too many times, and know it too intimately to be able to objectively look at it with brand new eyes. I meant for it to elicit a negative response in people after initial read, but I didn't think it would relate to how they critique as well.