12-26-2017, 11:22 AM
(12-26-2017, 08:26 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:Yes, that's exactly how I hear it.(12-26-2017, 07:31 AM)ellajam Wrote:Always found "still" to be an exceedingly useful word, manifold in meaning and connotation. Also has a bit of an ellipsis quality about it. Still...(12-26-2017, 06:41 AM)shemthepenman Wrote: seriously, the original is perfect. moving the “still” around is the epitome of unnecessary faffing about. of which milo is definitely a pro.Always fun to think about it and see what happens with a shuffle. That's what I'm here for, the faffing about, enjoyment in the play.
The light of day is a wonderful thing to open your eyes to, as is a frienly chat, especially when its about poems.
Wishing you some happiness in the new year, shem.
Still, milo's ear for words to reconsider in my poems has always been so on the money I will always give them some extra thought. Why not? 
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