Good Morning

[shemthepenman]

seriously, the original is  perfect. moving the “still” around is the epitome of unnecessary faffing about. of which milo is definitely a pro.

Always fun to think about it and see what happens with a shuffle. That's what I'm here for, the faffing about, enjoyment in the play.

The light of day is a wonderful thing to open your eyes to, as is a frienly chat, especially when its about poems.

Wishing you some happiness in the new year, shem.

i’m sure rearranging hamlet is “fun”. it’s still faffing. trust yourself. milo is one of the worst critics on the site. i would ignore his advice like the plague.