Good Morning
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(12-26-2017, 07:31 AM)ellajam Wrote:  
(12-26-2017, 06:41 AM)shemthepenman Wrote:  seriously, the original is  perfect. moving the “still” around is the epitome of unnecessary faffing about. of which milo is definitely a pro.
Always fun to think about it and see what happens with a shuffle. That's what I'm here for, the faffing about, enjoyment in the play.

The light of day is a wonderful thing to open your eyes to, as is a frienly chat, especially when its about poems.

Wishing you some happiness in the new year, shem.
Always found "still" to be an exceedingly useful word, manifold in meaning and connotation. Also has a bit of an ellipsis quality about it. Still...
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Messages In This Thread
Good Morning - by ellajam - 12-24-2017, 09:23 PM
RE: Good Morning - by dukealien - 12-25-2017, 12:15 AM
RE: Good Morning - by ellajam - 12-25-2017, 01:44 AM
RE: Good Morning - by Tiger the Lion - 12-25-2017, 04:53 AM
RE: Good Morning - by ellajam - 12-25-2017, 07:26 AM
RE: Good Morning - by milo - 12-25-2017, 08:56 AM
RE: Good Morning - by ellajam - 12-25-2017, 11:37 AM
RE: Good Morning - by milo - 12-25-2017, 12:14 PM
RE: Good Morning - by ellajam - 12-25-2017, 10:19 PM
RE: Good Morning - by milo - 12-26-2017, 04:04 AM
RE: Good Morning - by shemthepenman - 12-26-2017, 06:41 AM
RE: Good Morning - by ellajam - 12-26-2017, 07:31 AM
RE: Good Morning - by Tiger the Lion - 12-26-2017, 08:26 AM
RE: Good Morning - by ellajam - 12-26-2017, 11:22 AM
RE: Good Morning - by shemthepenman - 12-26-2017, 08:37 AM
RE: Good Morning - by ellajam - 12-26-2017, 11:11 AM
RE: Good Morning - by milo - 12-26-2017, 08:53 AM
RE: Good Morning - by shemthepenman - 12-26-2017, 08:58 AM
RE: Good Morning - by Thunderembargo - 01-03-2018, 11:53 PM
RE: Good Morning - by ellajam - 01-04-2018, 01:10 AM



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