Pleading With an Ibid's Hem (formerly The Golden Bullet), edit 1

[Lizzie]

Hello Todd, thanks so much for giving it a read. I think your take on the first stanza is similar to milo's, so that settles it for me that the first stanza needs to be cut or chopped up. But, certainly the dream part must go.

Thanks for the Cassandra reference, I didn't connect the two, but it's apt. I'll use that as a guide as I revise.

Very helpful, thanks as always for your imput.