Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor

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Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor

Joseph918
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12-21-2017, 05:26 PM

I love the imagery in the poem and where it was going. I felt the passion in the lines but I got lost in the very last line though.

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Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by rollingbrianjones - 12-06-2016, 02:01 PM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by CRNDLSM - 12-07-2016, 07:01 AM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by Quixilated - 12-07-2016, 09:05 AM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by Missy - 12-08-2016, 08:39 AM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by billy - 12-08-2016, 10:08 AM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by rollingbrianjones - 12-08-2016, 11:14 AM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by litQueen - 02-26-2017, 01:28 PM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by 18sawe - 04-13-2017, 09:05 PM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by Szczepan - 05-04-2017, 09:44 PM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by nibbed - 05-07-2017, 12:01 AM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by rollingbrianjones - 12-19-2017, 01:29 PM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by Szczepan - 05-07-2017, 01:04 AM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by 67eager - 05-08-2017, 08:32 PM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by Joseph918 - 12-21-2017, 05:26 PM

RE: Rhyme on a Short Skirt on Dancefloor - by chopblock - 12-24-2017, 01:35 PM

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