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(12-18-2017, 04:01 PM)Lizzie Wrote:  I felt a quickening when I saw these two little announcements of your return: < and > Big Grin 

I love how you do love poetry in a way that it's ok. Usually, I cannot bear it. I think this works for me because you're not trying to make love seem too epic or earth-shattering -- I think "silly" helps in this vein, the slight bit of bemusement with the self.

Another thing I love about this poem: Ray is back! Ray is back! Ray is back! Ray is back! 

>Big Grin<
Agreed.

it wouldn't kill you
to call more often,
silly boy
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< existential > - by rayheinrich - 12-18-2017, 06:45 AM
RE: < existential > - by vagabond - 12-18-2017, 09:44 AM
RE: < existential > - by nibbed - 12-18-2017, 09:57 AM
RE: < existential > - by RiverNotch - 12-18-2017, 11:37 AM
RE: < existential > - by Lizzie - 12-18-2017, 04:01 PM
RE: < existential > - by Tiger the Lion - 12-18-2017, 11:59 PM



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