12-18-2017, 04:01 PM
I felt a quickening when I saw these two little announcements of your return: < and > 
I love how you do love poetry in a way that it's ok. Usually, I cannot bear it. I think this works for me because you're not trying to make love seem too epic or earth-shattering -- I think "silly" helps in this vein, the slight bit of bemusement with the self.
Another thing I love about this poem: Ray is back! Ray is back! Ray is back! Ray is back!
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I love how you do love poetry in a way that it's ok. Usually, I cannot bear it. I think this works for me because you're not trying to make love seem too epic or earth-shattering -- I think "silly" helps in this vein, the slight bit of bemusement with the self.
Another thing I love about this poem: Ray is back! Ray is back! Ray is back! Ray is back!
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