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(12-18-2017, 06:45 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  


                [Image: pinkrose.jpg]


                                                                    < existential >

                                                            My winsome Bavarian Rose,
                                                            I'm crazy with love, head to toes.
                                                            You've filled me with kisses,
                                                            (and cozy night blisses );
                                                            Oh my!  How my silly heart glows.

                                                                            - - -




I'd thought for a second there that you hadn't put a picture in this, it took quite a while to load. That said -----
with that first line, I don't think the image is at all necessary: if anything, it's a bit of a detriment, considering the redundancy it introduces. I also don't see the significance of the title, although rooting existence to love is a sentiment I really like, so I suppose this latter point's aporia to me.
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< existential > - by rayheinrich - 12-18-2017, 06:45 AM
RE: < existential > - by vagabond - 12-18-2017, 09:44 AM
RE: < existential > - by nibbed - 12-18-2017, 09:57 AM
RE: < existential > - by RiverNotch - 12-18-2017, 11:37 AM
RE: < existential > - by Lizzie - 12-18-2017, 04:01 PM
RE: < existential > - by Tiger the Lion - 12-18-2017, 11:59 PM



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