wayward (edit 2)

[nibbed]

Hi vagabond



wayward                                                                        -I took this word at face value before the PS

so..                                                                                - missing a mark
he said
let´s forget about nietzsche                                            -seems to be a popular topic for some
and wayward words for a while
you
came to be
a terribly false thing                                                        -this line and the next is mystery, what is the "thing"?
in a terribly real world                                                     -terribly X 2
and that is why you are trying
to dig a worm hole.                                                        -I like this metaphor for space, it's really clever and twisted
                                                                                     
but..                                                                             
i thought i touched on a blade
and remembered this place
when the quote had not yet inverted its sense               -in a world of technology, there's no privacy 
and..                                                                                                                                         
this time before words
when there wasn´t a choice                                         
of which must be false                                                 
when metal was hot and cruel                                       -this goes in two directions for this reader, which is interesting
and i felt it, too.                                                             -this is a commonality of love or care



Though I am not grasping all of it, it seems more like a note than a poem...
I hope you are okay and doing well today.


-nibbed