Out the Window
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(12-13-2017, 04:17 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Out the Window
 
I was dreaming of church bells,
 
(probably because it had gotten to be a gale outside
and the wind chime out the window
was playing jazz)
 
a wedding
I think—
 
I'd remember a wake.
i thought there´s a very subtle dread in this.. the wake would be remembered because of its impact in meaning. in that context the part in the parentheses seems to describe more than just weather.
your poem made me think of "for whom the bell tolls" (no,  not the metallica song) and google this phrases origin by john donne.
thanks for posting.
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Out the Window - by Tiger the Lion - 12-13-2017, 04:17 PM
RE: Out the Window - by RiverNotch - 12-13-2017, 07:48 PM
RE: Out the Window - by Knot - 12-14-2017, 12:31 AM
RE: Out the Window - by vagabond - 12-14-2017, 02:16 AM
RE: Out the Window - by nibbed - 12-14-2017, 10:47 AM



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