Out the Window
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(12-13-2017, 04:17 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Out the Window
 
I was dreaming of church bells,
 
(probably because it had gotten to be a gale outside this line's too clumsy for me
and the wind chime out the window wind chimes, as I don't think a wind chime's enough to produce any sound, or at least any sound approaching jazz
was playing jazz) 
 
a wedding
I think— we hear church bells here everyday -- that said, we live only a couple of blocks away from a cathedral, but still. then again, "dreaming", but there's something about how church bells have far more uses than these two events at the end that bothers me: I feel like something far more specific should be used
 
I'd remember a wake.
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Out the Window - by Tiger the Lion - 12-13-2017, 04:17 PM
RE: Out the Window - by RiverNotch - 12-13-2017, 07:48 PM
RE: Out the Window - by Knot - 12-14-2017, 12:31 AM
RE: Out the Window - by vagabond - 12-14-2017, 02:16 AM
RE: Out the Window - by nibbed - 12-14-2017, 10:47 AM



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