At dusk

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At dusk
the leaves are bending.

They are fading away.                   Should this be two separate sentences?
The light they are closing.             

Under the ground
I won't be.




May I ask intention?
Is it a poem of faith
or one of deduction?
Interesting...


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Please clarify your question. I do not understand it. Still, I'm not an American. Thanks.

Hi Bogpan.

First, I would like to say hello. I haven't had the opportunity to do that. I am impressed with folks who are multi-lingual. I am barely good at my only spoken language, English.

I asked if lines 3 and 4 should really be separated, or should it be: They are fading away the light they are closing.

I was asking your intention. What are you trying to show the reader about At Dusk ? I asked if it is deduction because it came to my mind the speaker expressed great confidence in the last stanza. I wondered if the speaker concluded this through some deduction he/she had not shared with the reader.


Have a blessed night!

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