12-08-2017, 05:51 AM
(12-05-2017, 09:39 PM)Keith Wrote: She stood in front of the pramI know this woman. I see her every week, but she has a different face each time. I do what I can, but you can't educate a ghost.
repeatedly smacking
into an unseen cry.
Greasy hair and dirty clothes
her body moved in a way
that hinted at issues -- this is the only word I have "issues" with -- would like to see something concrete rather than policy-speak
and sheltered housing.
No eye contact or opinion,
he was somewhere else
shrinking into the shopping center, -- looks weird with the US spelling, especially since "shopping centre" isn't what Americans would call it, I believe -- I'm blaming your Yankocentric autocorrect![]()
watching the automatic doors
in crisis.
I caught her hand
holding on at the wrist,
she came back from behind her eyes,
a sail boat emerging from a storm.
Its nappy was full -- perhaps you'd consider a bit of a list here -- nappy full, sick-covered clothes -- to avoid issues that people are having with the pronoun
clothes covered in sick,
how could I explain what a child needs
to a mother that needed the same?
Sometimes they stay long enough to become flesh. Those are good days.
It could be worse
