Learned behavior
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(12-05-2017, 09:39 PM)Keith Wrote:  She stood in front of the pram
repeatedly smacking
into an unseen cry.
Greasy hair and dirty clothes
her body moved in a way
that hinted at issues -- this is the only word I have "issues" with -- would like to see something concrete rather than policy-speak
and sheltered housing.

No eye contact or opinion,
he was somewhere else
shrinking into the shopping center, -- looks weird with the US spelling, especially since "shopping centre" isn't what Americans would call it, I believe -- I'm blaming your Yankocentric autocorrect  Tongue
watching the automatic doors
in crisis.

I caught her hand
holding on at the wrist,
she came back from behind her eyes,
a sail boat emerging from a storm.

Its nappy was full -- perhaps you'd consider a bit of a list here -- nappy full, sick-covered clothes -- to avoid issues that people are having with the pronoun
clothes covered in sick,
how could I explain what a child needs
to a mother that needed the same?
I know this woman.  I see her every week, but she has a different face each time. I do what I can, but you can't educate a ghost.

Sometimes they stay long enough to become flesh.  Those are good days.
It could be worse
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Messages In This Thread
Learned behavior - by Keith - 12-05-2017, 09:39 PM
RE: Pass it on - by Mopkins - 12-05-2017, 11:20 PM
RE: Pass it on - by Keith - 12-06-2017, 03:00 AM
RE: Pass it on - by vagabond - 12-06-2017, 03:38 AM
RE: Pass it on - by alonso ramoran - 12-06-2017, 06:28 AM
RE: Pass it on - by Wjames - 12-06-2017, 12:33 PM
RE: Pass it on - by nibbed - 12-06-2017, 01:14 PM
RE: Learned behavior - by Knot - 12-08-2017, 12:23 AM
RE: Learned behavior - by vagabond - 12-08-2017, 05:36 AM
RE: Learned behavior - by Leanne - 12-08-2017, 05:51 AM
RE: Learned behavior - by flagthrower - 12-08-2017, 08:47 AM
RE: Learned behavior - by KYPunk - 12-08-2017, 02:59 PM
RE: Learned behavior - by Keith - 12-09-2017, 04:47 AM
RE: Learned behavior - by Radetof.Yahska - 12-23-2017, 07:38 AM



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