Learned behavior
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She stood in front of the pram
repeatedly smacking
into an unseen cry.
Greasy hair and dirty clothes
her body moved in a way
that hinted at issues
and sheltered housing.

No eye contact or opinion,
he was somewhere else
shrinking into the shopping center,
watching the automatic doors
in crisis.

I caught her hand                                                   best S, ever
holding on at the wrist,
she came back from behind her eyes,                                     
a sail boat emerging from a storm.                  

Its nappy was full
clothes covered in sick,
how could I explain what a child needs                                  
to a mother that needed the same?  



it would almost be better
if it was complete metaphor
and not an actual observance poem.  

nibbed
there's always a better reason to love
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Messages In This Thread
Learned behavior - by Keith - 12-05-2017, 09:39 PM
RE: Pass it on - by Mopkins - 12-05-2017, 11:20 PM
RE: Pass it on - by Keith - 12-06-2017, 03:00 AM
RE: Pass it on - by vagabond - 12-06-2017, 03:38 AM
RE: Pass it on - by alonso ramoran - 12-06-2017, 06:28 AM
RE: Pass it on - by Wjames - 12-06-2017, 12:33 PM
RE: Pass it on - by nibbed - 12-06-2017, 01:14 PM
RE: Learned behavior - by Knot - 12-08-2017, 12:23 AM
RE: Learned behavior - by vagabond - 12-08-2017, 05:36 AM
RE: Learned behavior - by Leanne - 12-08-2017, 05:51 AM
RE: Learned behavior - by flagthrower - 12-08-2017, 08:47 AM
RE: Learned behavior - by KYPunk - 12-08-2017, 02:59 PM
RE: Learned behavior - by Keith - 12-09-2017, 04:47 AM
RE: Learned behavior - by Radetof.Yahska - 12-23-2017, 07:38 AM



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