At dusk

At dusk

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12-06-2017, 08:34 AM

At dusk
the leaves are bending.

They are fading away. Should this be two separate sentences?
The light they are closing.

Under the ground
I won't be.

May I ask intention?
Is it a poem of faith
or one of deduction?
Interesting...

-nibbed

there's always a better reason to love

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At dusk - by bogpan - 12-05-2017, 09:57 PM

RE: At dusk - by Mopkins - 12-05-2017, 11:07 PM

RE: At dusk - by vagabond - 12-05-2017, 11:19 PM

RE: At dusk - by bogpan - 12-06-2017, 04:08 AM

RE: At dusk - by vagabond - 12-06-2017, 05:04 AM

RE: At dusk - by Mopkins - 12-06-2017, 06:16 AM

RE: At dusk - by nibbed - 12-06-2017, 08:34 AM

RE: At dusk - by bogpan - 12-07-2017, 05:16 AM

RE: At dusk - by nibbed - 12-08-2017, 04:17 PM

RE: At dusk - by moot - 02-26-2018, 02:44 AM

RE: At dusk - by Lorvick - 03-08-2018, 11:06 AM

RE: At dusk - by kenzlee_poetry - 04-24-2018, 02:48 PM

RE: At dusk - by moanlisa - 06-24-2018, 09:55 AM

RE: At dusk - by piggate - 07-17-2018, 05:49 AM

RE: At dusk - by Fae - 08-15-2018, 09:37 AM

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