At dusk

[bogpan]

At dusk
the leaves are bending.

They are fading away.
The light they are closing.

Under the ground
I won't be.

consider "bending/ towards the ground" so you might get rid of "they are fading away", which is too clear an explanation in my opinion.
light should be plural.
the last line needs a proof or simply the statement that no one wants to be.

Thanks for the suggestion. I will think about it. Does Faith Need Evidence?