12-05-2017, 08:08 AM
thank you, Dale
I believe you are right.
I may save it to insert into a poem.
I appreciate your taking the time to
comment on my little poem.
thank you, vagabond
I really like your shortened down
version, a lot. May I steal it from
you in a revision? It is wonderfully
far more fitting for this particular
forum. I will have to check out
my comments to find that poem.
nibbed
I believe you are right.
I may save it to insert into a poem.
I appreciate your taking the time to
comment on my little poem.
thank you, vagabond
I really like your shortened down
version, a lot. May I steal it from
you in a revision? It is wonderfully
far more fitting for this particular
forum. I will have to check out
my comments to find that poem.
nibbed
there's always a better reason to love

