The End of the World 0.01
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Thanks for the feedback. It seems someone edited their feedback, but as far as I remember nothing was lost. Very very slight cleaning up: I want to keep the first line IP, it sets a sort of rhythm-of-the-heart; and I didn't want to specify what sort of catastrophe is here, whether natural (Pinatubo in particular) or man-made.
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The End of the World 0.01 - by RiverNotch - 10-22-2017, 12:45 AM
RE: The End of the World - by Brownlie - 11-27-2017, 12:54 AM
RE: The End of the World - by nibbed - 11-27-2017, 05:36 AM
RE: The End of the World - by RiverNotch - 12-01-2017, 10:15 AM
RE: The End of the World 0.01 - by vagabond - 12-02-2017, 06:35 AM



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