11-30-2017, 12:50 PM
Hey Tiger,
I quite like the sound and rhythm of this. I even read it out loud a few times just to hear it more than once. I also like the imagery with the dreams, and the last line leaves a huge impression on the reader. This is a strong piece.
Nice work,
Richard
I quite like the sound and rhythm of this. I even read it out loud a few times just to hear it more than once. I also like the imagery with the dreams, and the last line leaves a huge impression on the reader. This is a strong piece.
Nice work,
Richard
Time is the best editor.