11-27-2017, 05:57 AM
Oh' to be a bird and fly! (why the apostrophe???)
freedom,
soaring above mortal toil (yawn cliched mortal toil ' why not 'sordid soil')
fleeing in altitudes- (maybe ascending in place of fleeing for spiritual oomph)
the gravity of the mundane
escaping the grinding down (hmmm maybe 'escaping the granulated hours'????)
of a measured life
what chance of flight now (question mark???)
thirty five summers
then consumed of dust ('by' in place of 'of')
Psalm 39:4
LORD, make me to know mine end,
and the measure of my days,
what it is; that I may know how frail I am. (just like the guy that got to see the grail huh?)
cool and cruisy -compliments
freedom,
soaring above mortal toil (yawn cliched mortal toil ' why not 'sordid soil')
fleeing in altitudes- (maybe ascending in place of fleeing for spiritual oomph)
the gravity of the mundane
escaping the grinding down (hmmm maybe 'escaping the granulated hours'????)
of a measured life
what chance of flight now (question mark???)
thirty five summers
then consumed of dust ('by' in place of 'of')
Psalm 39:4
LORD, make me to know mine end,
and the measure of my days,
what it is; that I may know how frail I am. (just like the guy that got to see the grail huh?)
cool and cruisy -compliments
My Muse, to labour chained
demure, pure, restrained
may yet escape -
i'll grab his cape
and hitch-hike to new planes
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demure, pure, restrained
may yet escape -
i'll grab his cape
and hitch-hike to new planes
mehopkins1971.wordpress.com