The Death Of (insert your name here) ism.
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cheers unpronouncable abbreviation dude

may change 'sold and burned' to 'bought and burned' after all u buy into a story etc
may also change 'might think him demented' to 'might think them demented' to clarify which idiot we're discussing
not sure what to do about the enjambment, kinda like kinky shit like that

anyhow, thanks for the advice and the read
My Muse, to labour chained
demure, pure, restrained
may yet escape -
i'll grab his cape
and hitch-hike to new planes

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RE: The Death Of (insert your name here) ism. - by Mopkins - 11-26-2017, 03:38 PM



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