11-26-2017, 04:42 AM
(11-26-2017, 04:29 AM)Knot Wrote: Reads like song lyrics, with the first/last stanza as the chorus
- was that the intent? Yes chorus repeated between each verse, but written I want to be more like poetry, I spose the revision I'll include the audio
Either way, too many pronouns. Only you and it, just said too many times, I'll see.what I can do about this. Thanks for the attention!
Best, Knot.
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