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[CRNDLSM]

Hi CRNDLSM,

I'm usually fine with poems beginning with the same stanza they end with when there's something in between that changes the perspective of the reader so that the final repetition has a different and thought-provoking impact, and I'm sure it's like that for most people. The 4th stanza was written first, I think it's the worst, maybe I can achieve that change in perspective, thanks 

 Here, the poem is riddled with a good amount of cliches what a compliment! that I feel would be fine if they were expanded on in a more original manner I'll see what I can do thanks again!

Best, Alex