11-24-2017, 05:19 AM
Hi CRNDLSM,
I'm usually fine with poems beginning with the same stanza they end with when there's something in between that changes the perspective of the reader so that the final repetition has a thought-provoking impact, and I'm sure it's like that for most people. Here, the poem is riddled with a good amount of cliches that I feel would be fine if they were expanded on in a more original manner.
Best, Alex
I'm usually fine with poems beginning with the same stanza they end with when there's something in between that changes the perspective of the reader so that the final repetition has a thought-provoking impact, and I'm sure it's like that for most people. Here, the poem is riddled with a good amount of cliches that I feel would be fine if they were expanded on in a more original manner.
Best, Alex