11-23-2017, 12:54 PM
The only dislike I have for the poem is the line: 'man spits on the cringing world'. I think it should be change to: ' "a" man spits on the cringing world.', so to imply a single persona; since the verse revolves around one persona.
What I like about the poem 'know-it-all' dilemma it describes, since it gives a valuable reflection of our today's world where almost everyone wants to be too intelligent and/or too powerful. What I also like about the verse is the fluid flow of structure of the lines towards a clear conclusion. It also finds strength in its subjective and authentic depiction of the dilemma.
Improve on your weaknesses. Continue to develop your strengths. Keep up the great work!
What I like about the poem 'know-it-all' dilemma it describes, since it gives a valuable reflection of our today's world where almost everyone wants to be too intelligent and/or too powerful. What I also like about the verse is the fluid flow of structure of the lines towards a clear conclusion. It also finds strength in its subjective and authentic depiction of the dilemma.
Improve on your weaknesses. Continue to develop your strengths. Keep up the great work!