First Edit: Sunday School
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Hey Knot,
Thanks for the feedback. I find whenever you critique one of my poems, there's always at least one thing you say where my reaction is, "Dang, that is a good point." An example from here would be your suggestion about using silver instead of white.

Greatly appreciated,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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First Edit: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-19-2017, 05:59 AM
RE: Sunday School - by vagabond - 11-19-2017, 08:46 AM
RE: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-19-2017, 10:42 AM
RE: Sunday School - by Todd - 11-19-2017, 02:49 PM
RE: Sunday School - by nibbed - 11-19-2017, 08:01 PM
RE: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-20-2017, 01:28 AM
RE: Sunday School - by nibbed - 11-20-2017, 03:57 AM
RE: First Edit: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-20-2017, 06:31 AM
RE: First Edit: Sunday School - by Todd - 11-20-2017, 02:06 PM
RE: First Edit: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-21-2017, 01:23 PM
RE: First Edit: Sunday School - by Knot - 11-21-2017, 11:25 PM
RE: First Edit: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-22-2017, 07:11 AM



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