prayer
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Hard to critique something called prayer. I like the humor, think 26 blocks is too many, unless it's one for every year of your life or something. It really feels aimless overall, not sure if it qualifies as a prayer at the end, who are you if God is third person... not that you say 'you' but all the requests seem to address a second person
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prayer - by Mopkins - 11-21-2017, 09:30 PM
RE: prayer - by CRNDLSM - 11-22-2017, 05:40 AM
RE: prayer - by Mopkins - 11-22-2017, 11:17 AM



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