First Edit: Sunday School

First Edit: Sunday School

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11-20-2017, 06:31 AM

Hey Janine,
I appreciate the support.

Thanks again,
Richard

Hey all,
I completed an edit for this piece. I draw on Todd's suggestion about Corinthians 13:11-12, so that might explain some of the changes. I also incorporated suggestions from nibbed and vagabond. Feel free to let me know if this is an improvement.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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First Edit: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-19-2017, 05:59 AM

RE: Sunday School - by vagabond - 11-19-2017, 08:46 AM

RE: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-19-2017, 10:42 AM

RE: Sunday School - by Todd - 11-19-2017, 02:49 PM

RE: Sunday School - by nibbed - 11-19-2017, 08:01 PM

RE: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-20-2017, 01:28 AM

RE: Sunday School - by nibbed - 11-20-2017, 03:57 AM

RE: First Edit: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-20-2017, 06:31 AM

RE: First Edit: Sunday School - by Todd - 11-20-2017, 02:06 PM

RE: First Edit: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-21-2017, 01:23 PM

RE: First Edit: Sunday School - by Knot - 11-21-2017, 11:25 PM

RE: First Edit: Sunday School - by Richard - 11-22-2017, 07:11 AM

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