11-19-2017, 06:39 AM
Hi Richard,
I think I'm actually pretty set on this edit. At the moment, I cannot come up with other words (meaning I can't spot a better word in the thesaurus) in place of "abstract". The artist makes abstract art which are the memories (making us the abstract artists as well, rendering this interpretation redundant. In this case, the word "another" would be used well to substitute abstract, but I think this artist is more worthy of some sort of characterization), or is an abstract thing-- which it is.
In the meantime, I think I'm gonna set this aside to look at later again with fresh eyes. Thank you nibbed, Knot, and Richard for your critiques.
Best, Alex
I think I'm actually pretty set on this edit. At the moment, I cannot come up with other words (meaning I can't spot a better word in the thesaurus) in place of "abstract". The artist makes abstract art which are the memories (making us the abstract artists as well, rendering this interpretation redundant. In this case, the word "another" would be used well to substitute abstract, but I think this artist is more worthy of some sort of characterization), or is an abstract thing-- which it is.
In the meantime, I think I'm gonna set this aside to look at later again with fresh eyes. Thank you nibbed, Knot, and Richard for your critiques.
Best, Alex