Final Edit: Argil

[Knot]

Hey Alex,
of the titles so far, I liked Greenware, though it doesn't really work with sculptor/sculpting.
Did you consider the (admittedly simple) 'clay'?
Not so much a critique, more something for your consideration:

[Memory] becomes damp and grey
[malleable] between fingers;
shaping light and color,
sounds [affixed] with slip
or scored, [molding] all
when an abstract sculptor
is not sculpting for us.

I'm not sure about the transition from L5 to L6

Hope this helps

Best, Knot.