11-18-2017, 05:10 AM
Hey Alex.
Better for the revision.
I do wonder if you need some sort of explanation (or hint)
about 'how' moments become damp...
I think 'attached' lets the piece down. Perhaps 'secured'?
Best, Knot
Better for the revision.
I do wonder if you need some sort of explanation (or hint)
about 'how' moments become damp...
I think 'attached' lets the piece down. Perhaps 'secured'?
Best, Knot

