Final Edit: Argil
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Hey Alex.

Better for the revision.
I do wonder if you need some sort of explanation (or hint)
about 'how' moments become damp...
I think 'attached' lets the piece down. Perhaps 'secured'?

Best, Knot
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Messages In This Thread
Final Edit: Argil - by alonso ramoran - 11-15-2017, 05:48 AM
RE: Plasticity - by bloated_corpse - 11-15-2017, 06:27 AM
RE: Edit 1: Plasticity - by Knot - 11-16-2017, 03:26 AM
RE: Edit 1: Plasticity - by alonso ramoran - 11-16-2017, 04:20 AM
RE: Edit 1: Plasticity - by nibbed - 11-16-2017, 04:37 AM
RE: Edit 1: Plasticity - by alonso ramoran - 11-16-2017, 05:29 AM
RE: Edit 1: Plasticity - by nibbed - 11-16-2017, 06:46 AM
RE: Edit 3: Plasticity - by Knot - 11-18-2017, 05:10 AM
RE: Edit 4: Greenware - by alonso ramoran - 11-18-2017, 12:11 PM
RE: Edit 4: Argil - by Knot - 11-18-2017, 11:35 PM
RE: Edit 5: Argil - by alonso ramoran - 11-19-2017, 01:15 AM
RE: Edit 5: Argil - by Knot - 11-19-2017, 04:02 AM
RE: Edit 5: Argil - by alonso ramoran - 11-19-2017, 05:04 AM
RE: Edit 6: Argil - by Richard - 11-19-2017, 05:31 AM
RE: Edit 6: Argil - by alonso ramoran - 11-19-2017, 06:39 AM



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