A Sense of Discomfort

[tony3]

I liked this. for me it is the writer's voice that comes through and makes this poem work. There is something acerbic here that I like. A real closeness with the contrary ideas of not understanding and then having questions that are easily answered at the end. It works for me. It's layered. It comes full circle. I am sure there is something I could say that might need improvement, but for now nothing comes to mind.