11-16-2017, 05:29 AM
Hi nibbed,
Thank you for your comments. You're pretty spot on with you're interpretation, but I'd like to hear what you mean about "a fall". I think I fixed the lines you commented on in my second edit.
Best, Alex
Thank you for your comments. You're pretty spot on with you're interpretation, but I'd like to hear what you mean about "a fall". I think I fixed the lines you commented on in my second edit.
Best, Alex

