Final Edit: Argil
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(11-15-2017, 05:48 AM)alexorande Wrote:  Plasticity 
 
A moment becomes damp and gray  
between my fingers. My hands begin 
to mold a bench's color, and words 
are sometimes carved or added if 
it all fits a metaphor, or a shady sculptor 
sculpts for me.
This poem is really deep. I don't really understand some of it. But the bits I do understand are really meaningful and deep. Its like about a carpenter building a bench, but he is sad because it reminds him of the bench he once sat on with his girlfriend when he was a kid. And they probably carved their names into it with a hart around their names. And now this bench he is making now is probably in memoriam of a dead granddad or someone else and it reminds the carpenter his own girlfriend is probably dead too. Its also a bit like a metaphor aswell, about how the mind is like a bench where memories and thoughts sit.
#thanks@alexorande
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Final Edit: Argil - by alonso ramoran - 11-15-2017, 05:48 AM
RE: Plasticity - by bloated_corpse - 11-15-2017, 06:27 AM
RE: Edit 1: Plasticity - by Knot - 11-16-2017, 03:26 AM
RE: Edit 1: Plasticity - by alonso ramoran - 11-16-2017, 04:20 AM
RE: Edit 1: Plasticity - by nibbed - 11-16-2017, 04:37 AM
RE: Edit 1: Plasticity - by alonso ramoran - 11-16-2017, 05:29 AM
RE: Edit 1: Plasticity - by nibbed - 11-16-2017, 06:46 AM
RE: Edit 3: Plasticity - by Knot - 11-18-2017, 05:10 AM
RE: Edit 4: Greenware - by alonso ramoran - 11-18-2017, 12:11 PM
RE: Edit 4: Argil - by Knot - 11-18-2017, 11:35 PM
RE: Edit 5: Argil - by alonso ramoran - 11-19-2017, 01:15 AM
RE: Edit 5: Argil - by Knot - 11-19-2017, 04:02 AM
RE: Edit 5: Argil - by alonso ramoran - 11-19-2017, 05:04 AM
RE: Edit 6: Argil - by Richard - 11-19-2017, 05:31 AM
RE: Edit 6: Argil - by alonso ramoran - 11-19-2017, 06:39 AM



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