A Sense of Discomfort

[QDeathstar]

A Sense of Discomfort


man spits on the cringing world
he's seen nothing he can't understand would prefer "seeing nothing"
which has made him madder I understand the need for rythm, but which has made comes off as wordy. "which still makes" perhaps.
than what his mother made him
putting him to bed
to a story of time's turning hand
molesting his mind insane
like asking a child questions
to answers he already knows

Nice short piece. Thabks.