11-12-2017, 10:27 PM
it´s a little hard to connect the three stanzas.
1. if life had no sense we´d throw it away, yes to that.
2. love in a very poetic description.. and a little cryptic (down-blue-see through).. blown glass is a beautiful image (but why "breathed once"? what when the glass cools down after having been hand-shaped? isn´t life, and love too, about change?)
3. death (i d say you don´t really need god for that). together with the middle stanza being about love i somehow recoil at "hope he moves to someone else".
1. if life had no sense we´d throw it away, yes to that.
2. love in a very poetic description.. and a little cryptic (down-blue-see through).. blown glass is a beautiful image (but why "breathed once"? what when the glass cools down after having been hand-shaped? isn´t life, and love too, about change?)
3. death (i d say you don´t really need god for that). together with the middle stanza being about love i somehow recoil at "hope he moves to someone else".
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