11-11-2017, 06:18 AM
Hi 71 degrees
I was perplexed at the last stanza.
If living were only a word
rather than a reason, every not sure you need rather than a reason
one would simply throw it
away
Cupid breathed on me I like that Cupid's breath shows sensitivity regarding love.
once and I was blown glass, can do with or without once, maybe
pulled down-blue-see through confused a bit by the hyphens, unless it relates to the art
and hand shaped
If there really is a God
and one day he calls me,
I will simply walk around
for a while and hope
he moves on to someone
or else I wondered about the calling what it represented: refusing service or running from death,
regardless, the ending was effective.
I was perplexed at the last stanza.
If living were only a word
rather than a reason, every not sure you need rather than a reason
one would simply throw it
away
Cupid breathed on me I like that Cupid's breath shows sensitivity regarding love.
once and I was blown glass, can do with or without once, maybe
pulled down-blue-see through confused a bit by the hyphens, unless it relates to the art
and hand shaped
If there really is a God
and one day he calls me,
I will simply walk around
for a while and hope
he moves on to someone
or else I wondered about the calling what it represented: refusing service or running from death,
regardless, the ending was effective.
there's always a better reason to love

