Edit 3: Chiaroscuro

[Achebe]

Chiaroscuro 

At night,
   store lights send you over 
   their ancient cobbled roads ... the cobbled roads don't belong to the store lights, I'd think
   with bars resounding music. ....a comma after roads and no 'with' would work here. 'With' is almost always a very loose conjunction
   Strolling on, I smile as you dance 
   beneath our passing bodies.  .... this is well done. I can see exactly what you're describing. The last two lines can be a short poem (in that format, the 'strolling on' would be superfluous, however)

Hi alex - this is a nice one. It would have been better with a second layer of meaning, but sometimes a poem can be perfectly fine as a word picture, which this one is.