Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch.

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Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch.

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11-05-2017, 09:43 PM

(11-05-2017, 09:40 PM)Achebe Wrote: The whole point of Siddharta Gautama's quest was to escape the cycle of rebirth, so the last bit doesn't work

Yes, so it fits the poem, each stanza a misled following. No?

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Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch. - by QDeathstar - 05-28-2016, 11:21 AM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by kolemath - 05-29-2016, 01:00 AM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by Magpie - 05-29-2016, 01:55 AM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by Joseph Didis - 05-29-2016, 03:40 PM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by Magpie - 05-29-2016, 06:19 PM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by Achebe - 05-29-2016, 09:36 PM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by QDeathstar - 05-29-2016, 10:28 PM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by Achebe - 05-30-2016, 09:49 AM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by 71degrees - 05-31-2016, 07:21 AM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by billy - 05-31-2016, 02:10 PM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by RiverNotch - 05-31-2016, 07:06 PM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by QDeathstar - 06-12-2016, 09:19 AM

RE: Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch. - by QDeathstar - 06-17-2016, 12:37 AM

RE: Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch. - by QDeathstar - 11-05-2017, 09:30 PM

RE: Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch. - by Achebe - 11-05-2017, 09:40 PM

RE: Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch. - by ellajam - 11-05-2017, 09:43 PM

RE: Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch. - by Achebe - 11-05-2017, 09:50 PM

RE: Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch. - by QDeathstar - 11-05-2017, 09:44 PM

RE: Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch. - by vagabond - 11-08-2017, 02:26 PM

RE: Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch. - by QDeathstar - 11-08-2017, 02:43 PM

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