11-02-2017, 07:43 AM
Alex, Thanks for the thoughtful critique.
I was wondering about that "such".
I am thinking about changing the adjective for crowns, too,
make it more fitting to what I see.
The chrysanthemums appear to be tiptoeing, they are standing
so tall to reach, not relaxed and easy as before in the warm sun.
I will have to consider all you have critiqued!
Thanks again!
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I was wondering about that "such".
I am thinking about changing the adjective for crowns, too,
make it more fitting to what I see.
The chrysanthemums appear to be tiptoeing, they are standing
so tall to reach, not relaxed and easy as before in the warm sun.
I will have to consider all you have critiqued!
Thanks again!
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