Edit 3: Chiaroscuro

[alonso ramoran]

Chiaroscuro 
 
At night, 
    ancient cobbled roads are
    lit by gift shops, pulsing  
    with music from the bars. 
 
Wandering  
    those streets with you,  
    I smile as you dance
    beneath our passing bodies. 

Edit 2: Chiaroscuro 
 
At night, 
    store lights send you over 
    ancient cobbled roads  
    while bars resound music. 
 
Wandering  
    these streets with you,  
    I smile as you dance  
    beneath our passing bodies. 

Edit 1: Chiaroscuro

At night,
   store lights send you over 
   ancient cobbled roads
   as bars resound music.
   Wandering these streets
   with you, I smile as you dance
   beneath our passing bodies.

Original: Chiaroscuro 

At night,
   store lights send you over 
   their ancient cobbled roads
   with bars resounding music.
   Strolling on, I smile as you dance
   beneath our passing bodies.