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10-28-2017, 12:31 PM

Hey all,
I decided to make an attempt at editing this one. Feel free to let me know if it's an improvement.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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First Edit: Parenthood - by Richard - 08-21-2017, 11:34 AM

RE: Parenthood - by billy - 08-21-2017, 07:15 PM

RE: Parenthood - by Tiger the Lion - 08-21-2017, 09:47 PM

RE: Parenthood - by Todd - 08-21-2017, 11:34 PM

RE: Parenthood - by Richard - 08-22-2017, 03:07 AM

RE: Parenthood - by homer1950 - 08-22-2017, 03:55 PM

RE: Parenthood - by Richard - 08-26-2017, 11:50 AM

RE: First Edit: Parenthood - by Richard - 10-28-2017, 12:31 PM

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